Rhyme, amendment

I wrote a set of verses (idk if it's technically a couplet, so i'm sayin it like that) and it reminded me of the Rhyme i wrote earlier, so i decided to keep going and I ended up with a pretty interesting poem. Free-form, of course, but that's cuz i like the sound of free-form better than actually rhyming the verses or trying to worry about sylables and the stress pattern of words. :)


Pull down the lightning from the sky
And hold it raw in your scarred red hands

In your eyes the black-blue waves of a deep ocean are reflected
Unbroken, unseeing, and I wonder where you are

Black heart pumping black blood from the center
I see it pulse and answer my own question


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There was more but it felt kinda awkward and unnatural so i didn't put it on here.